The villain.
A cackle. An arrogant quip. A threatening vow of defeat.
Villains drive our stories and give our heroes and heroines the opportunity to face fear and become the best versions of themselves. But....a good villain is very hard to write. They have to be as heavily researched as your main character, and they have to have their own motivation that actually is battle-worthy.
I find that a lot of villains are written the same way. Arrogant, sarcastic, cynical and cooler than you. This type has its place, but I love it when the bad guy is unsure, or so underrated that the hero or heroine doesn't even know to fear them.
The best villains follow-through with what they're going to do. (Up until the end, of course!)
The best villains don't monologue. They don't miss their chance. They take it.
I say, let the villain go. Let him or her win a little. This makes them believable, and, the most important thing....it makes your hero or heroine have to fight. It gives them a reason to overcome. It allows them to escape, to be smarter, to be brave.
Don't be afraid to write a silent villain, one who waits, who sneaks up on the good guys. Or one who's so clumsy that he or she gets passed over because they seem disorganized. Or one that is noisy and won't quit. I promise you'll figure out how to get the good guy out of trouble, and you'll have a better story because of it.
My first book, Welcome Home, has a bad guy. Most of my stories do, though I wouldn't say I write romantic suspense. Villains are sooooo much fun, but, thankfully, my compassion doesn't extend to wanting them to win. (Whew!)
I'm not too sure if I wrote a good villain in Welcome Home, but I did fool my father. He's the king of figuring out who did it, and I managed to stump him. I call that a win!
In Welcome Home, Emma Prescott has to prove she's not the spoiled heiress Kyle remembers. Her father killed Kyle's, and this also puts a rift in Emma and Kyle's relationship, especially since she lied to the sheriff. But she battles for Kyle's forgiveness. She starts her own farm and fights a stubborn mule, the Texas heat, a devastating tornado, Kyle's pain and anger and last...her father. It's a beautiful story of forgiveness and courage. And if you read it, I hope I fool you, too!
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I am such a wuss that my favorite villain is always the one who finds redemption (probably in the love of a good woman, which I hate to admit). A fun post and I'm glad you fooled your dad!
ReplyDeleteWho can resist a great villain. They stubbornly live in our memories. Sounds like Emma and Kyle have a lot to overcome! Great conflict for your book and lots of "fooling."
ReplyDeleteMaleficent is very cool. I think, after seeing the Broadway show Wicked, that I love the Wicked Witch of the West.
ReplyDeleteHow funny, I watched Malificent yesterday afternoon--again. I can't wait to see the next one. I love writing bad guys and watching each layer unfold as I write my stories.
ReplyDeleteOne of my fav bad guys is Hannibal Lector from Red Dragon. Great blog!
Great post! The best piece of advice I've ever read is to remember that the villain thinks they are the hero in their own story.
ReplyDeleteA good villain is very hard to write.especially if you want to make them multi-dimentional, maybe even a little sympathetic.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite villain is the Wicked Witch of the West. I know, a cliche...but still...she'd lost her sister, was in danger of losing her broom, her castle was infiltrated by wandering marauders and her flying monkeys had to be yelled at to get them to fly. (does no one just do it the first time they're asked?) She deserves a little sympathy, right?
ReplyDeleteMy favorite villain is Snape. He is such a complex character.
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I love Snape!!! He is one of my favorites. Such a very well-thought out character!
DeleteEnjoyed your post. My scary villain list: The Demogorgon in Stranger Things {shudder}, the Alien in that movie franchise, and in literature, Annie Wilkes in Misery, Nurse Ratched in One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest, Anton Chigurh in No Country for Old Men, and The Outsider in Watchers.
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah, that thing in Stranger Things....VERY scary.
DeleteOne of my favorite villians is Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer.
ReplyDeleteMsredk at aol dot com
That's a good one, too!
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